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Girl Rising

For brave girls there is no sanctuary, stormy waters spur us like waves, echoes of silence decks our diary; got guts, we have no path in graves. We are the womb of tomorrow, the tomb of treats and terror; sailing against the tides of sorrow, not to be eroded by tidal errors. Pain is part of the party, we dance still when the music goes mad; oppression makes strong our stance, better we get when things go bad. Rope the rapist... tame the terrorists, vengeance to us is not a choice, save our soul from stormy sadists, hear budding roses ring in one voice. We charm and change the world with our beauty, brain and brawn; don't rule and ruin our world, let each dusk birth new dawn. Our fruits are stolen and boles broken parasites sap nectar before dawn; but deep within we stand, unshaken, golden grapes litters the lawn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/18/2014 11:28:00 PM
Adeleke,, Congratulations:)~ Enjoyed, reading every awesome poem on Richard's L, Gender Bender winning list. ... XoX.... LINDA
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Date: 6/18/2014 8:24:00 PM
I love the line pain is part of the party, we dance still when the music goes mad...great imagery...hugs Tim
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Date: 6/18/2014 5:57:00 PM
I like that "let each dusk birth new dawn' brings hope that even after the terror there is a new life, refreshed to come forth, a new opporitunity to grow :) well done in the contest :)
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Date: 6/18/2014 12:56:00 PM
Adeleke, Congratulations on your sweet win, awesome Gender Bender win...SKAT
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Date: 6/18/2014 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest Gender Bender,
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Date: 6/18/2014 9:30:00 AM
This one resonates with me, congrats on your win in my contest. It looks like you have two wins from my contests now with the same poem. If you have a chance read my "Girl Rising" and "Boy Sitting" I think you will appreciate them.
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Date: 8/20/2013 8:04:00 PM
The title drew me in, and I was not disappointed. This piece portrays such courage and strength. Perfect.
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Date: 8/7/2013 6:59:00 PM
Wow verse 4 and 6 are dynamite!!! You go Ade! [PS they have great meter!] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/6/2013 7:43:00 AM
Thank you for writing of this tradegy...congratulations on your win...
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:51:00 AM
:-) Congratulations!!! ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:03:00 AM
Adeleke, ... Congratulations in Richard's "Girl Rising." contest.... always *LINDA
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Date: 8/5/2013 8:06:00 AM
Moved me! Thanks for entering.
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