Gifts Ultra Rare

Folded in cloth, her eyes did shine Parabola shifted by pi, ‘the daughter is mine’ Said in front of others, How did you feel inside? Okay let’s make a confession It was on mother’s guide. The girl grew up, As broadens a brook. Papa followed Mama, She had a beautiful look. Mama hugged the life Papa was reluctant But the daughter believed in him Someday, he too would be resilient. Then occurred an accident, Mother had to go. Daughter was left with father And he got a blow. Papa, papa, she said In everything that followed. Little did she know, She would never be endowed. Then 10 years later, At 4 o’ clock in evening, Daughter didn’t come home The thought itself was aching. For maybe he didn’t want her He was a dad within Was it already too late? Got a rush of adrenaline. Went to the police, Took help of a neighbor Nothing came in hand, Except the morning newspaper. "10 year old, raped and murdered" Stood the headline distinct. The face was translucent, But the apparel succinct. Dressed in mourning stands, He who didn’t care. Daughters are not a burden They are gifts ultra rare. Respect them, accept them, Without them, the world is despair.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/2/2017 8:56:00 AM
I like the tone you use
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Date: 6/9/2013 4:59:00 AM
I like the way you write Shivam,I think you should share more.Well penned!
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Date: 5/29/2013 10:48:00 AM
truth well explained so well written but let me tell you don't ever tell dad's do not care, in fact this inbuilt fear makes them hate for they feel it is an unnecessary burden to bear, just imagine how much that man should have felt for the rest of his life, each time he would see a girl of that age. and always ignorance is a bliss, and she feels that's the way a parent shall behave
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Date: 5/25/2013 11:09:00 AM
Shivam, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/17/2013 8:20:00 AM
yes girls are beautiful gifts and everyone should gracefully accept them .
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Shivam Murari
Date: 5/18/2013 7:24:00 AM
Indeed we must. Thank you great poet, for reading and commenting :-)
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