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Getting a Share of the Sun

Why leave yourself stuck between four walls? The weather is fine. Don't you hear its calls? Everything pleasurable is within reach. There is plenty of sunshine at the nearby beach. We can romp on the surf and sand, and have some fun. Let's go out and get a share of the sun. Inspired by another member's poem

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Date: 1/28/2014 7:57:00 AM
I like this. Always love the sun! Yes, get out and enjoy it :)
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Date: 1/25/2014 3:56:00 PM
sunny and 13 degrees go ahead.
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Date: 1/25/2014 4:49:00 AM
makes me long for summer Robert well penned and congrats on featuring Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/24/2014 9:57:00 PM
It has been another frigid, winter day here, but this poem brought me back to the warmth of summertime. I really enjoyed this poem, Robert. Well done!...Thank you for the kind comments.
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Date: 1/24/2014 8:30:00 PM
Commendable. It is the heart of poet from where the inspiration oozes out.
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Date: 1/24/2014 4:09:00 PM
sounds good on this freezing cold day!
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Date: 1/24/2014 2:52:00 PM
Living in the coastal city of Biloxi, Mississippi I can appreciate this write..Thanks for your visit.. Ken
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