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garnets and carnations

right and
deep love and Warmth.
Garnets of red are January’s friend.
 The sweet smell of red carnations drift in the air 
is what my 

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  1. Date: 1/21/2012 9:23:00 PM
    congrats cory on a stupendous win for this creative entry my friend.. hope all is well..luv..

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 9:40:00 PM
    Glad to see this gem made the winners' list, Cory. Congratulations to you!

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 8:32:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Cory. Well done

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 7:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win for your poem in Tracie's "~Flowers or Stones~" contest Cory. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 6:48:00 AM
    A beautiful stone, a lovely flower and a really nice poem of the two. Congrats on your placement in the contest !!

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 5:47:00 PM
    HOw lovely the way you combined both flower and stone, Cory. I really like this, and you used a good form for it.

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 2:06:00 PM
    Great double take here, Cory...this was the perfect form for this contest. It showcased your month so nicely. January is where it's husband's and father's bdays are here too...good luck, Cory...Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 7:27:00 AM
    incredible, cory.. are you january-born like me, tracie, and david williams??... winner for me..:) huggs!

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    Date: 1/15/2012 5:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yeah jan 21 :)
  1. Date: 1/14/2012 8:11:00 PM
    Great idea for a tectracys poem, Cory. In the sixth line, there are eleven syllables which is one too many. Just a suggestion: how about replacing "Surrounded by" with "We have those"? Everything else looks fine.

    long Avatar cory long
    Date: 1/15/2012 6:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you! cory