Full Moon Float

Late at night
I slip into the river
I like to float with the current
Dark and scary
Never knowing where it will 
Take me.
Sometimes it pulls me under
Other time it's as gentle as a lamb
It snakes and turns
And tumbles me
Till I am exhausted
Sooner or later I am upon the shore
And I lie there and look upon the stars
Wondering why God put me here
I dig my toes in the sand
And grasp a willow root
Just to feel something real
And then I get up 
And roll a smoke
And laugh at the wind
For I am just a fool in love 
And stagger back up the road
I put my thumb out
And hitch a ride back home
Sometimes we talk 
Sometimes we don’t
But we always seem to smoke
And share a story or two or three
And tell a couple of bad jokes
I shake their hand and say goodbye
But I'll see them again
The next time I get the itch to float 
Upon a full moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 9/9/2013 3:58:00 AM
Stephen, it is a pleasure to be back reading on your page. My my my have I some catching up to do. I am so excited to read some of your recent poems. Also I must thank you for your gracious reviews on my work as well. This poem speaks to me in many ways. I love a good float in the water, looking up at the wonderful sky. I am glad you chose to write of it. Sometimes its good to get out into the open air and just breathe in all of the beauty surrounding us. Always, Laura
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 9/9/2013 7:17:00 AM
Laura,good to have you back! Missed you. thanks for the gracious comments. I love a good float especially at night with a full moon. Something very magical about the whole experience. ~Kilmer
Date: 8/15/2013 12:17:00 PM
Sounds dreamy, floating in a river under a full moon not knowing where you might end up. So many things happening in this one. Great imagery.
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Date: 8/15/2013 5:39:00 PM
The river of mystery. I float it often. Thanks Karen for taking the time to comment and read my work. Kilmer
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