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Full Moon Float

Late at night I slip into the river I like to float with the current Dark and scary Never knowing where it will Take me. Sometimes it pulls me under Other time it's as gentle as a lamb It snakes and turns And tumbles me Till I am exhausted Sooner or later I am upon the shore And I lie there and look upon the stars Wondering why God put me here I dig my toes in the sand And grasp a willow root Just to feel something real And then I get up And roll a smoke And laugh at the wind For I am just a fool in love And stagger back up the road I put my thumb out And hitch a ride back home Sometimes we talk Sometimes we don’t But we always seem to smoke And share a story or two or three And tell a couple of bad jokes I shake their hand and say goodbye But I'll see them again The next time I get the itch to float Upon a full moon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/9/2013 3:58:00 AM
Stephen, it is a pleasure to be back reading on your page. My my my have I some catching up to do. I am so excited to read some of your recent poems. Also I must thank you for your gracious reviews on my work as well. This poem speaks to me in many ways. I love a good float in the water, looking up at the wonderful sky. I am glad you chose to write of it. Sometimes its good to get out into the open air and just breathe in all of the beauty surrounding us. Always, Laura
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 9/9/2013 7:17:00 AM
Laura,good to have you back! Missed you. thanks for the gracious comments. I love a good float especially at night with a full moon. Something very magical about the whole experience. ~Kilmer
Date: 8/15/2013 12:17:00 PM
Sounds dreamy, floating in a river under a full moon not knowing where you might end up. So many things happening in this one. Great imagery.
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Date: 8/15/2013 5:39:00 PM
The river of mystery. I float it often. Thanks Karen for taking the time to comment and read my work. Kilmer

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