Full Moon

full moon-- hot breath of whispers hangs on her ear

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Skat A

Date: 1/4/2016 12:24:00 PM

after reading this, I think, you're a pro.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/23/2010 10:14:00 PM

sent you soupmail (I am not a stalker haha)

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 11/11/2010 12:12:00 PM

Intriguing haiku,great work.

De R

Date: 11/6/2010 11:07:00 AM

great imagery in this haiku, Phong! You sure captured a nice scene. Emilia

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/6/2010 10:50:00 AM

ah a full moon... how fitting for you ;) kidding! soupmail

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/6/2010 9:20:00 AM

I do understand prayer, meditation, poetry is very individual. After study (one can study ones whole life!) out of respect for those who have come before and excelled before you/me, you/we find our "way" On the site it is only being fair to be clear with the entrants what my/your way is as a judge of the contest, that's all I can do. Please review some of what I call my haiku and see if they come anywhere near to the "original intent or your understanding now of then?" Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/4/2010 9:47:00 AM

evocative! and thanks for making me aware the "cut" can be in line 1 (that would give you more words to develope the subject;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/1/2010 7:31:00 PM

this made me smile-- nice imagery-- you sure have an interesting way of depicting things, enjoyed this-- nikko :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/1/2010 3:12:00 PM

Nicely written Haiku... very enjoyed Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/1/2010 12:39:00 PM

Very creative and meaningful haiku with good images, Phong