Full Moon

full moon--
hot breath of whispers
hangs on her ear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 1/4/2016 12:24:00 PM
after reading this, I think, you're a pro.
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Date: 11/23/2010 10:14:00 PM
sent you soupmail (I am not a stalker haha)
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Date: 11/11/2010 12:12:00 PM
Intriguing haiku,great work.
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Date: 11/6/2010 11:07:00 AM
great imagery in this haiku, Phong! You sure captured a nice scene. Emilia
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Date: 11/6/2010 10:50:00 AM
ah a full moon... how fitting for you ;) kidding! soupmail
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Date: 11/6/2010 9:20:00 AM
I do understand prayer, meditation, poetry is very individual. After study (one can study ones whole life!) out of respect for those who have come before and excelled before you/me, you/we find our "way" On the site it is only being fair to be clear with the entrants what my/your way is as a judge of the contest, that's all I can do. Please review some of what I call my haiku and see if they come anywhere near to the "original intent or your understanding now of then?" Light & Love
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Date: 11/4/2010 9:47:00 AM
evocative! and thanks for making me aware the "cut" can be in line 1 (that would give you more words to develope the subject;)
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Date: 11/1/2010 7:31:00 PM
this made me smile-- nice imagery-- you sure have an interesting way of depicting things, enjoyed this-- nikko :)
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Date: 11/1/2010 3:12:00 PM
Nicely written Haiku... very enjoyed Michael
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Date: 11/1/2010 12:39:00 PM
Very creative and meaningful haiku with good images, Phong
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