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Fruitless Labor

In winter Fruitless labor of wind No leaves to blow off.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Skat A
Date: 5/23/2015 11:13:00 AM
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Nick Bagnall
Date: 11/11/2011 6:18:00 AM
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I get where you are coming from, I guess Debbie has a better understanding of the form, I also see the validity of her comment. I still like it.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/11/2011 5:40:00 AM
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sigh..no caps, no periods [open conceptually] you are deciding the wind is doing something fruitless..stay to things which are factual scensory the fall leaves/cling to the tree/ strong wind rises
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 11/11/2011 5:33:00 AM
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we seem to have oaks that liter leaves all winter....
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