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Fruitless labor

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Fruitless labor

In winter 
Fruitless labor of wind
No leaves to blow off.

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  1. Date: 11/11/2011 6:18:00 AM
    I get where you are coming from, I guess Debbie has a better understanding of the form, I also see the validity of her comment. I still like it.

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 5:40:00 AM caps, no periods [open conceptually] you are deciding the wind is doing something fruitless..stay to things which are factual scensory the fall leaves/cling to the tree/ strong wind rises

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 5:33:00 AM
    we seem to have oaks that liter leaves all winter....