Frozen In Time

Water stuck in time,
Seeping through the frozen cracks;
Gleaming off the sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 5/23/2009 12:54:00 AM
Great imagery Justin.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/19/2009 6:27:00 PM
Oh wow this imagery pierced straight into my soul. -Alley
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Date: 5/18/2009 11:18:00 PM
You are writing up a storm in this concise form. My favorite forms too, love your work. Love E.
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Date: 5/18/2009 4:14:00 PM
This is a very nice write, water is such a powerful element. Fast moving water can be so destructive and frozen water can flex its muscles and can be just as powerful.
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Date: 5/18/2009 3:30:00 PM
Good job Justin never could write a haiku myself. really like the title good job
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Date: 5/18/2009 8:17:00 AM
Nice.
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Date: 5/17/2009 10:05:00 PM
Nice work Justin, love the first line. DN
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Date: 5/17/2009 9:46:00 PM
Hey, nice one!!! Frozen water managed to cheat time, or at least it found a way to avoid being worried about it...not a natural creation after all (time is man made, I guess); thanks for the experience!!!=) You just changed the perception of ice for me =D that rocks!!!
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Date: 5/17/2009 9:07:00 PM
Nice work on the imagery, glaciers casts beautiful scenes...Raul
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Date: 5/17/2009 9:01:00 PM
sounds like my life sometimes... Great Write
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