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The night turns to day 
And one season changes to another 
But why do I 
Stay the same
Everything changes around me 
And I can feel nothing
The years past and the 
Time changes but I have
Been frozen everything keeps moving around
Me but I can not seem to move on
The life I know no longer moves 
But stands still frozen in time
Have I died and cant understand why 
Has my life ended and my mind still wonder
Or is this all a long endless dream that wont end
I watch every one around me 
I sit there while the world spines 
I sit there in my world of frozen time
A world that no one can see 
Me but I can see every one
Why has this happened 
If this is all a dream 
Why wont it end

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  1. Date: 5/15/2010 10:03:00 PM
    very interesting i liked it