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Frosted Embers

Winter rides On the weathered Wings of the wind Through a heavy sky Where violet hues are Pinned. Wispy Clouds flow like Angel Hair in graceful curls Winter's frosted embers Adorn the earth like millions Of priceless pearls. A Cleansing renewal transpires From the harshness of winter air Divine growth emerges from a land That is hushed in graceful prayer. Beautiful Wisdom radiates from Inside this wonderland of pristine light As a kaleidoscope of color emanates From this heavenly prism of white. Carole Cookie Arnold 01/02/2010

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Date: 8/4/2011 3:21:00 AM
This was very good. I read it through several times just to keep the words echoing in my mind. I've seen the times when a winters day can be as pleasant as a warm spring day. The crisp air of a winter breeze that carries the cool clean smell of dormant nature. The stillness of life that awaits for a new rebirth to bring the surroundings alive. The crunch of snow underfoot. The sting of chill on the cheek. An exhaled puff of breath that drifts away. Thanks Carole, for making me long for winter.
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Date: 8/2/2011 6:00:00 PM
Such a nice cool write in this heat I needed that! BIG congrad's on all 3 of your works moving forward! Light & Love
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:45:00 AM
Superb writing Carole. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie
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Date: 3/18/2010 7:42:00 PM
congrats on the feature!very lovely,indeed.
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Date: 3/17/2010 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Carole. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2010 10:56:00 PM
Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it. Keep on sharing. God bless and congratualtions. Ernilando
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Date: 3/14/2010 5:59:00 PM
Congrats Cookie on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent choice to feature from a wonderful poet.. where have u been hiding? luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/28/2010 11:52:00 AM
Extraordinarily this poem's suggestive nature, especially the last stanza. Amazing as wisdom radiates from the prism of white(Love) of the vortex of heart. I see I didn't make it to this poem's graduation, so belated congratulations on your win with it. Sincerely, love, Moses
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Date: 1/18/2010 1:04:00 PM
Beautiful!! Congratulations on your win in Laura's contest. Wonderful use of imagery and rhyme. You are a talented writer. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 1/17/2010 1:39:00 PM
Well Congrats to u Cookie on your winning poem in Laura's contest... great entry and well deserved win... I have been serving on Jury Duty for two weeks almost and have not been on Soup as much until this trial is over..hope to be back very soon sharing poetry... I did post three new ones today if u care to read... talk soon again.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-marie..
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Date: 1/15/2010 10:13:00 AM
I totally fell in love with the last two sets of five lines of your poem. Very nice and whimsical. Congratulations on placing with this piece!
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Date: 1/14/2010 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations Carole, on your success in Laura McKenzie’s “Winter’s Adornment ” contest with your wonderful rhyming poem. It's easy to see why you are in the winner’s circle. I don't know whether you noticed, but the words form the shape of a winter evergreen tree. So, it could also be a shape poem. Very nice and greatly enjoyed. Your poetic skills excel. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/11/2010 10:36:00 AM
Carole, many congratulations on your placing in Laura's fine contest >> James
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Date: 1/11/2010 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's contest Carole. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2010 11:36:00 PM
OOPs, you WERE in the ten, but it was called honorable mention!!!
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Date: 1/10/2010 11:35:00 PM
So glad you earned a mention. I would have given you in the top ten! So visual and delightful . Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/10/2010 9:54:00 PM
Very beautiful, Carole, Congratulations on your win in Laura's contest. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with us. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/5/2010 5:16:00 PM
Thankxxx Cookie for your gracious comments on my poetry tonight.. I luv this poem and I think u should enter it in the "Winter's Adornment" contest sponsored by Laura McKenzie.. check it out on the contest page .. this is a perfect entry ... I so appreciate your comments and your input too.. enjoyed reading.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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Date: 1/5/2010 10:34:00 AM
hey there cookie:) welcome to poetrysoup! I have been here couple of years..your poetry is awesome! everyone that reads them is in for a treat! this poem is beautiful! God bless you! Erin
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Date: 1/4/2010 3:32:00 PM
Beautiful write. Welcome to poetry soup, your sublime gift shakes the tree of love; I am honored to read to work as a friend. Happy new year
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Date: 1/4/2010 12:13:00 PM
Thank You Andrea I do have more like this and will post soon. It is so nice to meet you I will be over in a few days. Love Cookie
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Date: 1/4/2010 7:56:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Carole. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/3/2010 2:35:00 PM
Welcome to Our site..Excellent work..Charma
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Date: 1/3/2010 8:59:00 AM
This is just beautiful, Carole. If you have more poetry like this, I hope you will show it. also, I like that second name of yours! Luv, andrea
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