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From the Nest of a Poem

The time you breezed into my life you’ve opened my heart and let me felt a love once more your love shined bright like a sportlight conquered my heart with your blink- less passions everytime you questioned me did i love you so i just didnt know how to reply and filled me with teary nuance like a helpless kitten on a kitchen stubborned disobedience to your commands i knew how to sing i knew how to praise but i just didnt know how to say what have i done to deserve your love a very extraordinary golden love silken smoothness honey tasted the love that swayed from left to right in your poetic heart colored my basic emotions not try to entomb my silence let the poems speak love from its silence to express the feelings as the sky kissing the earth from the nest of a poem breeze you comfort delicate drops of my love till eternity ~(c)sukmawati komala~ 21 march 2013

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Date: 3/31/2013 6:08:00 PM
Oh I like Sukmawati,, happy have a blessed Easter ;}
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Date: 3/31/2013 4:03:00 PM
Very expressive work that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for your visits..Your comments are very encouraging..Sara
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Date: 3/30/2013 9:12:00 PM
Sooo beautiful poem my dearest friend! I'm deeply moved while reading it! Thank you so much for continuously sharing your precious gem and superb talents. Big big sweet hugs to you! Have a great & lovely day! love much, Leonora
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Date: 3/30/2013 7:14:00 AM
Excellent. Very touching write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 3/29/2013 6:32:00 PM
Delicate poem on love again, nice one, Suk, how are you?, luv:) Jag
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Date: 3/29/2013 5:57:00 PM
your poetry always has such beautiful imagery. this is lovely.
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Date: 3/29/2013 4:37:00 PM
Oh, pure poetic, flowery words. Love it, Sukmawati :)
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Date: 3/29/2013 12:02:00 PM
Sukmawati this is excellent...David
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