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From Milan

The dimming sun with grey entwines; Slow fluttering of feathers in ones side, But slow walks, snap shots, clothing lines, And true selves get suffocated by pride. Entrusted things we cannot really share. The mind, thoughts and self together. I covet what I see when others pair, They watch me so I'd surrender. As stone towers are gold in the clear sky, I pass crosses that the written past bears. We can't be caught forever in the rye. All that remains is dust and feeble prayers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/7/2016 10:47:00 AM
Luminita Stoica, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/18/2016 12:31:00 PM
Luminita, Awesome write, Thank You for sharing... SKAT...
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:08:00 AM
I am so pleased to have been able to read your poetry this morning Luminita. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2010 6:56:00 AM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..luv.. "Sweetheart" .. new contest "Shining Star" posted by me ..why not give it a try? luv.. "Sweetheart"
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