Fries

so thin and hot and greasy dipped in red ketchup crispy, yummy, potatoes fried and golden white licking salted lips suck fingers MORE 5/5/11 Contest:Fast Food Epulaeryu

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/10/2011 10:55:00 AM

I love fries!! Oh shucks, now I am craving for some big fat greasy ones-- crispy outside and just mealy inside oh durrrnnnn >.< -- replied to my blog-- thank you for dropping by there & happy mother's day hugs to you :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2011 9:02:00 PM

Debbie.I LOVE french fries. When my stepdad got paid every thursday night, it was our hamburger night, but instead of the two burgers /bag of fries we each got,I always opted for two bags of fries/one burger. I would still do it today if I ate those things very much anymore!! Yummy poem!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/8/2011 5:44:00 PM

Deb, I really couldn't have come up with a fish "tale" like that. It happened just that way a few years ago... Hope you had a great Mothers Day and really enjoyed your blog! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2011 1:55:00 PM

greasy and good luck,,, have your self a wonderful MOTHERS DAY tomorrow... celebrate with smiles ... take care..P.D.

Daver Austin

Date: 5/6/2011 3:24:00 PM

Yum! All I can think of is calories. Everyone says French fries are not good for you. to hell with them! Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/6/2011 11:33:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry today Debbie. Thank you for all your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and inspiration to continue your poetry. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 5/6/2011 10:43:00 AM

Excellent!VERY tasty.

James Peranteau

Date: 5/6/2011 6:34:00 AM

;) awesome Debbie ! Have a great weekend....much love, james

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/6/2011 5:53:00 AM

The only thing I enjoy in the evening visiting a Mall or a store. Debbie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2011 7:51:00 PM

LOL I only like fries when they're really greasy -- the artery blocking kind. Enjoyed your epulaeryu, Deb. Thanks for your kind words. Best wishes in Gwendolen's contest! Love and blessings, Carolyn