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Below is the poem entitled FRIENDS FOREVER which was written by poet saket suman. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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the parlour of my heart was empty, no wheels in my cart,
sweet friends, you filled the gap~you filled the heart!
lifeless was my life ~no rain no breeze,
sweet friends, you painted it with memories!
you've struggled for words when my verses didnt rhyme,
you've given me an hour when you had no spare time!
when my life turns challenging and misfortunes seem to crush,
the memories come to light of the daes spent together by us!
days we have spent together~ together we spent the hours,
we have played with the dust ~ have played with the flowers!
when that the tears of sorrow have kissed your cheeks,
friends i've cried at heart, have cried for weeks!
long years of togetherness will shortly fade away,
the sun will soon set and end our golden day!
but i treasure you in my heart wrapped in love,
no failure ~ no success, MY FRIENDS ABOVE...........

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  1. Date: 8/5/2011 10:20:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup... a pleasure reading your creative poetry... enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 9:17:00 AM
    Nice write on friendship but please pay attention to the form i.e. Acrostic

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 7:47:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Saket. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 3:55:00 AM
    heartfelt poem of friendship, excellent write i like this.