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Friendly Freeformmmm

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Friendly Freeformmmm

'Baby, you taste like chocolate,
 
You and me we'd make a great rhyming couplet.
 
A.K.A a grinding couplet.'
 
 
 
'You can get on top of me like enjambment.'
 
 
 
'I can show you some wild imagery,
 
Me on you, you on me.'
 
 
 
'Metaphor stands for meet-at-four,
 
We'll get it on till the break of dawn.'
 
 
 
'Damn, could you BE anymore sexual?' -an example of a rhetorical question you could include...
 
 
 
'S-s-s-s-s-SEX!'- an example of sibilance you could use (and probably will).
 
 
 
'Annotate me honey, and together we can achieve a deeper meaning.'
 

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  1. Date: 5/4/2013 8:05:00 AM
    Definately not boring.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:07:00 AM
    A stunning piece of work, truly. I don't want you to get too excited by this but, I genuinely believe this could perhaps go down as one of the most eloquent poetic pieces OF ALL TIME. Congratulations on your mastery of such beautiful imagery.