Friday

Breezy Friday morn I fear your colors A heart is dusty

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Anne Rutherford

Date: 4/28/2011 3:02:00 PM

Desiree for me most days are the same , but when I was working outside the home fridays were special . Did you get out on the town. hope so .Anne

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/26/2011 8:06:00 PM

Lovely and lilting creation Desiree.. like the dusty heart reference luv.. thankxx for your sweet comments on my poetry .. so appreciated..luv..

James Foulk

Date: 4/26/2011 2:07:00 PM

since i retired all the days are the same, except Friday, knowing that my wife will be off for the weeken. loved this piece, enjoyed reading it.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2011 11:17:00 AM

Deriree, now.. i love fridays no matter the time and season.. love your haiku.. p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/21/2011 8:38:00 AM

An inspiring write as Good Friday approaches, Desiree. Surely all Christ's friends feared that day as well, but if you are fearing the onset of a lonely weekend, I can relate to the "dusty heart" sentiments. Have a blessed Easter! Love, Carolyn

Michael Gelb

Date: 4/21/2011 5:42:00 AM

I'm sorry but I don't under. Thank you for reading my poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2011 12:11:00 AM

An interesting one. The dusty line makes me feel that you need some TGIF FUN!!