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Below is the poem entitled FREYJA OF THE NIGHT which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Winter dark...solstice etches itself on texture of bleak silhouette ebon in fervor...cycle’s lymph grips the inked winds halving the cleft between old eve and fresh sunset as morn falls on dry ice...asleep, yet kismet unlocks ...creatures reap harvest of new moon’s keep. We call to you oh Mother Night through dances bold... in purity, a circle cast in pearled delight from dusks impressed by sanctity our candles burn for life’s bounty lyrics ole trill...magic-soft elements alchemy of holly sheen to ride aloft. Freyja, one with Mary...bewitch within the dark of darkest night we dance the fire with trimmings rich, your blessed radiance... stars ignite as womb brings forth...a child of light one tender spirit filled with worth a promise of new Yuletide bright the gift of word...made flesh...son’s birth! ....... ... ........ Happy Holidays of Debbie Guzzi by nette onclaud Modranith:Freyja ( Norse Goddess associated with Mothers' Night) * end /near rhymes intended

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  1. Date: 12/12/2013 7:52:00 PM
    So know the history of this is amazing, as always you never disappoint!

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 11:51:00 AM
    Thank you for extending yourself to dip into the mother's well! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 5:55:00 AM
    Congratulations Nette xx

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 12:18:00 AM
    Congrats Nette.... :)

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 11:01:00 PM
    Congrats on the win, nette

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 11:01:00 PM
    Nette, a wonderful win...Linda

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 12:25:00 PM
    Hi Nette wow what a class writer you are, this is brill my friend, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 5:35:00 AM
    Wow, this is another incredible write of yours my friend! You never cease to amaze me with your clever word choices that blend together as if made just for your poem! The message of this piece is filled with light within the night, within the Mother of Night! What a glorious poem, sure filled with hope and inspiration! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 12:03:00 AM
    Remember me??!! :)) Awesome write! It's always pleased me to read your work, and you never stop to amaze me. Just dropped by to say hello to an old friend.. love to you nette, gautami

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 9:34:00 PM
    Beverly said it too nette..and everyone else just always know what words to put together to build a touching masterpiece like scarcely..breathes while reading it...

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 8:42:00 PM
    Nette, when you write poetry, it's as if the words always belonged together, made for each other. And the best poems teach us something, like this one. Bev

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 5:29:00 PM
    I am not familiar with Feyja but I do know good writing when I read it. Outstanding piece.

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 5:03:00 PM
    A great write for the winter solstice Nette, this year we are going to walk the labyrnthe by candle light, I can't wait, be blessed my friend, you know how to bring out the best of the Holiest Of Moments, perhaps you are a twinkling light in the Christmas treasure chest, warm hugs xxx

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 4:13:00 PM
    I'm not familiar Norse Mythology, but I loved your poem Nette.this one should be a winner....peter

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 3:45:00 PM
    Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for the visit..Sara

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 3:10:00 PM
    The way the images come together form an elevated, chant-like hum reflecting the depth of your poem.The last stanza is a great finale of a holy ritual, " son's birth". I admire your style!

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 1:12:00 PM
    - Am I missing an angel on top of my Christmas tree ...... your beautiful poetry should hang on top, Nette - perfect!! - Love it !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 12:54:00 PM
    Absolutely wonderful! I loved what you did here! I haven't read about Freyja in ages! This was excellently done!