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Below is the poem entitled FREEDOM LEAPS CONSTANZA which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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On moonlit bay do herons row With swerving curves their plumes unfurl As white-bleached robes dip into twirls. Forms pose around the ridge, aglow Allowing limbs to flaunt contours While breezes watch near migrant lure. Down shoreline wide, beaks sting a blow To feast on prey before long flight And rest through foams of soft twilight. Mid-air, flock wheels a graceful flow Ascending high on crowns afire Like lofty rite along sky’s lyre. And high above,birds croon...hello! Where freedom leaps, a nature’s gift Inspiring herons’ roam, adrift. On moonlit bay do herons row Forms pose around the ridge, aglow Down shoreline wide, beaks sting a blow Mid-air,flock wheels a graceful flow And high above, birds croon...hello!
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  1. Date: 2/25/2014 12:58:00 AM
    Oh Nette, this is so wonderful! Congratulations on your well deserved win with this outstanding beauty! I loved it!

  1. Date: 2/13/2014 6:45:00 AM
    Hi nette! Love to read this again..Congrats on a wonderful poem and win! hugs

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 1:20:00 AM
    Congrats QOP, in nette's house there are many victories there.

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 6:22:00 PM
    I am liking this poem very and the form is a good one to learn, Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 5:10:00 AM
    Congrats nette for being number one in this contest;I am not surprised, you are nonpareil.

  1. Date: 2/9/2014 11:09:00 PM
    Salutation for your aspirant poem and graceful win.

  1. Date: 2/9/2014 8:00:00 PM
    One of the prettiest ones I have seen. Congrats on a great win!

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 7:59:00 PM
    Another great piece from you Nette. I can see those plumes unfurling. It must be nice to fly. Bev

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 6:04:00 PM
    And thrust with spin; as an eagles flow, joined, spinning low low low *smiles* ! Loved this write (right) ! Have a wonderful night....much love, james

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 2:54:00 PM
    Hi Nette, Some lovely and rich imagery here.. Ken

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 2:30:00 PM
    Lovely images you portray, nette! Very nicely done.. Great Stuff! This is a fine form and contest. love...

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 11:28:00 AM
    wow i am reading some amazing poetry today,, and this just keeps it going on and on,,,what a wonderful poet you are,, this the masters of old should witness....

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 8:40:00 AM
    Fantastic snippets of life on herons from earth to air journey. Brings me joy --- exhilarating package of poetry.

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 8:39:00 AM
    Fantastic snippets of life on herons from earth to air journey. Brings me joy --- exhilarating package of poetry.

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 5:13:00 AM
    You're page is always a delight to the senses, Nette, just dropping in to say hello, I hope all is well with you, big hugs, Vie xxx

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 10:39:00 PM
    Very nicely written Nette, An excellent poem...Peter

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 10:01:00 PM
    Nice job on a tough form to work with.

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 9:47:00 PM
    You have expounded upon a very unique subject matter here with this awesome write my friend! I really loved reading this tremendous poem here this evening! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 4:15:00 PM
    awesome write, Nette. Belated birthday greetings x

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 4:06:00 PM
    This poem soars using a subject not quite expounded on a regular basis.I just have to say I think these stanzas on herons are packed with imaginative, solid metaphors!