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Below is the poem entitled FREEDOM which was written by poet Sheryl OB'rien. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I once saw this beautiful bird,

flying in the sky.

It looked down at me mockingly,

as if to say I am free.

I looked back with envy.

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  1. Date: 12/20/2010 2:45:00 PM
    Personally, I envy flying birds because I feel Freedom belongs to them. Thank you for reminding me that, Sheryl. Welcome to Poetrysoup!

  1. Date: 12/20/2010 2:13:00 PM
    Plenty of descriptiveness in relatively few words. This is an impressive output.

  1. Date: 12/20/2010 9:34:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write today and interesting theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. with luv..