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Freedom

I once saw this beautiful bird, flying in the sky. It looked down at me mockingly, as if to say I am free. I looked back with envy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/20/2010 2:45:00 PM
Personally, I envy flying birds because I feel Freedom belongs to them. Thank you for reminding me that, Sheryl. Welcome to Poetrysoup!
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Date: 12/20/2010 2:13:00 PM
Plenty of descriptiveness in relatively few words. This is an impressive output.
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Date: 12/20/2010 9:34:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write today and interesting theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. with luv..
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