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FREE MOTION

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FREE MOTION



Tapped percussion dribbles a wham,rushing on quivers of sensation through my blood, when duskfall changes its beat to jazz a dizzy ride in gush of night, I roll. Notes throbbing a cadence along blues' mood as velvet of skin begins to open, unmentionable thrills of breath unwind claimed by music so raw, wild hips sashay. Hands unfurl in a lift of tempo's rise; while my body gyrates in free motion like rippling fire, I can't stop toes ablaze and the circle of groove jives on to reel. Oh, just one more grasp of this revelry while conga drums beg for another dance inhaling euphoric whim, life's vein where pulses burst as dawn's moments arrive! ...................... Mood Music with Original Details Contest Sponsor: Sheri F. Harper by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 2/26/2014 9:24:00 PM
    Nette , thank you for setting the music and the mood with your winning. Poem. Congratulations:) Take Care ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 6:00:00 AM
    Wow!! another great piece...I'm your fan. Congratulations on your win ;) Bangkok is still in red alert....thanks for your concern. Hugssss :)

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 2:52:00 AM
    ooh Nette this sings and dances lovely poem congrats on win hugs

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 6:04:00 PM
    Your poetry always causes a sensation Nette, I am inhaling euphorically congrats on your win luv xxx

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 2:27:00 PM
    Wow, this is fabulous Nette. Way to go girl. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smile, Connie

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 3:49:00 AM
    Enjoyed your write on mood music and congrats on the win,nette

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 12:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Nette--this was a really tough batch to judge, all so well written. I appreciated yours for your sense of dance and rhythm. Thanks for entering my contest.

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 10:10:00 PM
    wow, girl, this is awesome; heady, euphoric, and out of this world. you sure live in some of the best spaces:)

  1. Date: 1/25/2014 10:58:00 AM
    you carried me into your dream Nette excellent pen Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 1/25/2014 6:34:00 AM
    Very skillfully written. Love the highlighted poem within, too. If you haven't written a poetry book, yet, you should. (I looked to see and couldn't find one. I think I would enjoy owning a book of your poems...just saying. So let me know if and when...)

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 11:53:00 PM
    This has made turn the clock back to the night club scene. So strongly written, so sensual. Well done, thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 8:35:00 PM
    Dance and veil in the submerge of lines. It is great to read line by line. Prefarably it is wonderful and nectar in the realm of poetic fame. Bravo! keep it up.

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 3:34:00 PM
    What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 2:20:00 PM
    Very expressive lines penned...Interesting work..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 2:15:00 PM
    Whatever you have been wafting through the air my dear, is pure and simple exotically intoxicating, I hope we all catch it, the euphoria you speak of, now spread your wings and fly, to the highest high, xxx

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 1:42:00 PM
    - Makes me think back in time ...... A truly superb poem, Nette. - Have a enjoyable weekend, enjoy! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 12:54:00 PM
    Pump up the rhythm! This upbeat poem makes my adrenaline rush as the tempo of music invigorates.Awesome! Am glad I placed in your contest, Nette. Thank you lots!

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 6:41:00 AM
    I just love a good beat, a great song, and better yet, a strong rhythm! You really do love the night don't you Nette? I too just love the night, there's something euphoric about the night that can't be explained except through a poem...and your poem here is one such explanation! I surely loved reading this amazing beat enhanced poem this morning! Music casts a spell on you too Nette, ah it does wonders to me as well! What a fantastic piece, such an outstanding poem, Great Work!!