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Frame of Reference

My reality might be The opposite of yours. You may think the words I write Are merely metaphors. Some may be, I’ll give you that, But mostly they’re the truth, A frame of reference I’ve been in From early days of youth. Of course, that frame’s expanded As experience has grown. We each exist within a world We cling to as our own. But oftentimes I get a jolt That knocks me for a loop. What’s obvious to me Is not to others on the Soup. Within my frame of reference I describe the things I’ve seen. I’m shocked when those beyond that frame Do not know what I mean.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/9/2012 10:33:00 AM
I totally agree. I too am shocked when I write a poem and people don't seem to get what I have written. It seems so clear to me, well done.
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Date: 9/5/2012 12:24:00 PM
Enjoyed your expressions today. Cindy
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Date: 9/5/2012 5:21:00 AM
many different styles of writing and poets on PS Ilene ..not to be dismayed if some do not understand your messages as we all write from within ..hard to determine meanings of expression sometimes luv .. we have all experienced what u have penned in this piece ..
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Date: 9/4/2012 9:59:00 AM
I've never doubted a word you have written ilene, in fact you are a breath of fresh air, here on the soup.
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