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Fragrant Love

My Beloved, If the Mediterranean waves, could carry me to your arms, I'd wake up, to your whispers,enchanted by your charms. If the Wafting Wind could breeze me to the your bed, Our longing lips would kiss and hiss,In hungry emotions wed. If this love i feel, could linger in your Heart,If we could live our dulcet dreams,escape from fantasies,and never be apart. If "I "could be with "You",and "You" could be with" Me" We'd watch the the Stars at night twinkling tranquility, Sparkling in secret splendor,shining Our blissful destiny. If we could be together,till the day,"Forever",I'd hold on to your hand,be your sufficient other,the dedicated lover and even your bestfriend.I'd be your daily listener,your passion, your romance,I'd love you to infinity,till the Universal ends. If We could lie together on Gossamer mattressed lands, on threaded silken sheets made by cobwebs' perfect hands, If We could walk,laugh and embrace on gold warm Honeyed Sands. If we could hear the sweetest sound of shells and pebbles play, If I could call your name and hear your husky voice in answer everday,If I could turn around to find you,looking my way, If I could be with you,and live "the promise" of today, Tomorrow I'd still be there,a Lavender in your grey. "Not for the contest,but tnks Andrea..for your inspiration, with your contest blog" Words used-(Fragrant,Wafting,dulcet,Splendor,Gossamer.tranquility,Blissful from bliss,lavender) Charma

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Date: 2/23/2016 8:41:00 AM
beautiful poem Charma. Your beloved would be blessed with your presence. Love this write. simply love it dear friend
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Date: 4/12/2010 4:16:00 PM
This is really beautiful, heartfelt...Definitely goes to my favs. today...Thanks for your kind comments on mine, but "Yearning" is pure fantasy LOL just a made up poem for Jared's contest!! We got a kick out of writing that..Peace, audrey..
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Date: 4/12/2010 1:13:00 PM
A very colorful, sweet, romantice write. If... (sigh). Thank you for sharing and thank you for your mind comment on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 4/12/2010 7:55:00 AM
Touching poetry Charmaine ! You always find a brisk and romantic way with these romantic poems ! Just lovely ! TY for sharing ! james
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Date: 4/12/2010 6:38:00 AM
Tried to reply to your Soup Mail but it did not go through.. no title in the top bar so don't know... if that affected it... can u send me your Soup Mail again please? luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:20:00 PM
very enjoyable read tonight!
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Date: 4/11/2010 9:30:00 AM
Andrea,Somtimes I can't even find the answer to why i dn't enter conts..I find it ok to enter the mangement contests..where there are many writers partcipating and I'm just a number, but I'm afraid that If I do enter contests between friends..I will loose the fun of writing and fall in the nest of competing between friends..and instead of a hobby,my hobby will turn out into a hectic competition,that is how i think..which most probably is bad,maybe one day,I take part,lol,maybe I will,tnks dear.
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Date: 4/11/2010 9:20:00 AM
Beautiful images here, Charma, some really enchanting lines (just loved your final line with lavender). I know you do not enter the contests. I can understand why I think. So many of the same people, good poets, all vying for top spot. I think it may be wise that you choose to go the non competitive route, and look at the amazing poetry you are being inspired to create. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/11/2010 8:05:00 AM
What a gorgeous love poem, Charmaine!! The words were inspiring ...each on their own...and you combined them beautifully!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/11/2010 8:00:00 AM
I will never understand why u do not enter these extremely gorgeous and touching poems in any of the contests... they are so elegantly beautiful... your first two lines just blew me away dear friend Charma... and the use of Andrea's words are magnificent... hope all lovers will read this new fav of mine ...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/11/2010 6:26:00 AM
A very fine poem on longing. I enjoyed its rhyming
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:28:00 AM
Great write filled with fragance of love..Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:05:00 AM
amazing work! Char! jamesy
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:00:00 AM
What a lovely read on this beautiful sunny Sunday in Inverness > delightful poem Charmaine >> James
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Date: 4/11/2010 12:55:00 AM
Very romantic in a flowery way, nice imagery and emotion, flows well, moves the soul. Judy riley
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