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Fragility

Fragile beast so hard to break Fragile beast never to wake Fragile beast his life so still Fragile beast losing his will Fragile beast no lie to hide Fragile beast heart open wide Fragile beast a shining star? Fragile beast his body at war

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/22/2009 4:23:00 AM

No matter how tough we think we are there is something somewhere that can bring us down. Outstanding writing Gareth. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/21/2009 5:20:00 PM

We certainly do become fragile when we open our hearts. If injured, it can destroy our will to move forward. But when one's own body is "at war" with itself, our future is in God's hands. Very moving, Gareth! Love, Carolyn

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/21/2009 3:34:00 PM

Gareth... It is always a pleasure to read your words and thoughts... 'Fragile Beast'... yes, what seperates Man from Beast... That, which makes us in God's Image - Grants us 'Peace'... (Our Emotions, Our Intellect, Our Ability to Know, who and just what we are)I See the Struggle of the beast, So hard to Break... I say let it rise a Shining Star... This Poem Flows Beautifully... MoonBee

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 9/21/2009 12:53:00 PM

Nicely rhymed poem, Gareth, and thank you for your recent comments on my poem also, depression isn't easy to cope with but it can be overcome..thank you. ~Trudy~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/21/2009 12:51:00 PM

Who is this fragile? Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara