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Fragile Vases

Self-esteem is such a fragile vase Easily shattered by thoughtless words You can tell by the look upon her face That the breakage has already occurred On the verge of becoming a woman Venturing out into the world on her own And she is battered by words full of venom From adults who should better have known You should build her up and not tear her down Simply because you envy her for her youth You’ve already had your night on the town Don’t destroy her with what you think is truth The pieces that now lay broken Are not easily put back into place You cannot take back words that were spoken And restore the confidence that you have erased Allow your child to love herself And be proud of the vase that she is Remember your youth and how you once felt Wanting the confidence to go out and live By Joe Flach, written for the Picking Up the Broken Pieces Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/5/2012 1:33:00 PM
Marvelous write and wonderful message Joe....congrats on an awesome win! Hugs
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Date: 10/30/2012 2:24:00 PM
Very inspiring lines! A well-deserved win.
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Date: 10/30/2012 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in "Picking Up The Broken Pieces" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2012 2:06:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win. Seren
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Date: 10/29/2012 10:57:00 PM
CONGRATS JOE ON A SUPERB WRITE AND FIRST PLACE WIN LUV ..
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Date: 10/29/2012 8:46:00 PM
Joe, Congratulations on your win,,, always~pd
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Date: 10/29/2012 8:09:00 PM
Such a loving, touching poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/29/2012 4:57:00 PM
Convincing advice Joe and a winner. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/29/2012 4:51:00 PM
words full of wisdom..congrats on a well deserved win
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Date: 10/29/2012 4:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Broken Pieces" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/29/2012 1:48:00 PM
Beautifully written and beautifully said. All I can say is that you wrote this with style. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Lucilla
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Date: 10/26/2012 9:45:00 AM
great poem and excellent advice!
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Date: 10/26/2012 8:19:00 AM
Another weekend is here and I have not read as many poems as I would have liked to this week. I am happy I was able to read yours today. Have a wonderful weekend Joe and I wish you the best in the contest. Hopefully I will be able to read more next week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2012 7:36:00 AM
Love it Love it Love it. So few understand the impact their words hold on a young persons life. The ones that do the hurting have often been hurt themselves and think the heartache they are providing is help. So sad.
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Date: 10/26/2012 1:17:00 AM
Wise words. Good luck in the contest!
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