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Fragile Perception

Internal children Condemned for existence Blazon desires for love-- Purgatory within emotional walls of fury— Sweet sacred adoration cracks my golden crypt-- Your depth soothes my tormented heart-- Vicariously accepting the worlds bleeding demons— ~Through your fiery eyes EVIL has banished~ Your passion is my kingdom…

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Date: 12/19/2009 1:06:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week!! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/19/2009 11:46:00 AM
Amazing. Amazing. Best wishes, Sara
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Date: 12/15/2009 12:48:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soup this week >> James
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Date: 12/15/2009 2:29:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserving honor. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/14/2009 6:24:00 PM
Vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a gripping way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 12/14/2009 11:27:00 AM
Ron - many congrats on being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/14/2009 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured at PoetrySoup this week Ron. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/14/2009 5:52:00 AM
congrats on being featured this week
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