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FRACTURED HAIKU

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FRACTURED HAIKU

Wee old Lady Who
Resides in a tennis shoe
Grandsons live there too

WHEWW!

This is a fractured haiku

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  1. Date: 12/26/2012 8:41:00 AM
    Just looking at some poems that I put in favs..I got a chuckle again..Sara

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 10:27:00 PM
    Daver, a very good fractured haiku... is this like the nursery rhyme... the old lady and the shoe.. love it...pd

  1. Date: 6/29/2010 8:47:00 PM
    OH, I love this. A bad smelling shoe house. AWesome. And I recall letting my dog Ollyver lick my plate. Then I just set it in the sink to soak before tossing it in the dishwasher! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/19/2009 8:37:00 AM
    Nicely written humor. Thanks for the comments on my Pear Shaped Momma Somewhat. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 2:30:00 PM
    Quirky Haiku Daver, made me chuckle. James

  1. Date: 5/23/2009 4:14:00 PM
    Got me chuckling with this one! Thank you for the day brightener. Keep on writing! Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

  1. Date: 5/21/2009 3:20:00 AM
    EEK! I can smell it from here! not pretty. she netter get out her whacking stick and kick all those boys out. go get a job, young'un! lol you are so cute. love, Kristin

  1. Date: 5/20/2009 12:50:00 PM
    Love this!!! I find your fractures delightful! Great Haiku my friend!

  1. Date: 5/20/2009 11:44:00 AM
    Aha! Now I get it and yes it is quite the opposite! Is this fractured as in fractured fairy tales? ~lol~ Lovin it Daver! Too funny. Love, shar

  1. Date: 5/20/2009 11:01:00 AM
    This is sooo funny, Daver! I see a bit of a Scot in your "wee old lady." Great haiku! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/20/2009 7:41:00 AM
    LMAO!!!! Daver you are priceless and so is this haiku. *^_^* Thanks for the laugh. Love you! Love C