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Below is the poem entitled Fractalscope which was written by poet Ian Petch. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Duality spreading through the land
Above my head; beneath my hands
The greatest darkness I’ll become
Or one to show you the brightest sun

Open my eyes unto this world
Forget the silence I had heard
Lingering on into this earth
A sense of evil without worth

Open my eye as I recall
Imagination as I fall
The pain of knowing what I was
A monster blinded by their cause

A pleasurable passion to restart
The thought of choices in my heart
Not what to follow - to agree
Instead remembering humanity

Create a universe from sand
Building foundations without my hands
Turning the darkness into light
With a simple understanding of the night

The paradoxes I can find
Knowing we’re not free will free our minds
In seeing shadows we feel the sun
Closing our eyes reveals freedom

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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 4:40:00 PM
    still digging on this fantastic piece of art

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 11:49:00 AM
    very interesting poem take care always p.d.

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 9:04:00 AM
    a masterpiece!!! so glad some one her knows how to do it. the rhyming was excelent, but the content was superb. this is better than a ten its a twelve. and it goes to my faves right now. thank you for the gift of this.

    Petch Avatar Ian Petch
    Date: 3/22/2012 10:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for enjoying my poetry :)