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Four to Blame

Blame it on the sea
That crashed upon the sand,
And washed away my heart
That I had drawn for you.

For my heart is what you wanted,
But my heart I could not give.

Blame it on the rain
That fell upon the words,
The words that told my love
That I had written down for you.
For my love is what you wanted,
But my love I could not give.

Blame it on the wind
That blew upon my life,
And scattered all my dreams
That I had dreamed with you.

For my dreams are what you wanted,
But my dreams I could not give.

So, if you sit there lonely
Blame the sea, the rain, the wind,
But if these three seem not enough,
Blame it all on me.

For I am really all you wanted,
But myself I could not give.

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  1. Date: 4/19/2012 7:55:00 AM
    I love this poem. It seems as if it came right from my mind.

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 5:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning poem in Susan's "Blame It on the Rain" contest Tiffiny. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 10:17:00 AM
    Tiffiny congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 9:53:00 AM
    Nicely done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 8:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your #6 win in my contest!

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 3:01:00 PM
    Enjoyed your poem Tiffiny I hope it is for the contest blame it on the rain, great entry hugs vie