Forever Never Comes

He promised forever his love it would last
and now I"m alone here with only the past.

I try not to cry I think only of good
He said I am wrong and I misunderstood.

It's easy to dwell on the things that we said
recounting the questions all here in my head.

Perhaps if I said this or tried to do that
His love would be mine now in place and in tact.

I wonder dear God will this pain leave my heart?
It seems like forever alone here apart.

The couples walk past me, I lower my head
It hurts just to see them, my soul may be dead.

What happens to life that gets tattered and torn?
I wake up so tired and helpless and worn.

I miss his blue eyes and his blond wavy hair
It's hard to believe that he just doesn't care.

Oh please day go quickly and turn into night
It's then while I'm sleeping the pain it takes flight..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/12/2012 5:30:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured.
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Date: 10/10/2012 6:06:00 PM
very good write.
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Date: 10/10/2012 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Sharon. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/17/2010 9:04:00 AM
i feel this peace so much in my heart thank you duncan
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Date: 10/8/2010 6:33:00 PM
Very awesome and intriguing write, enjoyed it, Sharon
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Date: 10/8/2010 3:09:00 PM
Sad and touching poetry Sharon. The feelings jump from your words >> James :)
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Date: 10/8/2010 3:04:00 PM
Very sad poem.But also beautifully written.Things will get better it just takes time.Oh i hate to hear a persons heart breaking.I just pray everything gets better.Love,Jamecia
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Date: 10/8/2010 2:59:00 PM
wonderful heartfelt poem on love loss... we all feel it sometime but always opens doors for bigger and better....Always Michael
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