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Forever Demands

Fate declared this life there is no time time for us to be together, yet surely some justice found in this the universe, a planned after life where you are mine and yes, I become yours © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 3/8/2013 10:19:00 AM

A wonderful example for a very difficult form I'm happy to know, Harry! Great write, indeed! Thanks for stopping by my Questionku! It's very uplifting! Love, Hanitra

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/6/2013 9:54:00 AM

Wonderful expression of passion of real love. You do nicely always. Loved always, bl

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/1/2013 10:51:00 AM

It is a promise to hold in the heart, Harry...a place where time and space are absent! Great job as always. Hope all is well, my friend. Always, Annalise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/1/2013 4:57:00 AM

I am sure you will become one sometime harry and what a joy it will be xx

Dan Kearley

Date: 2/28/2013 8:47:00 PM

So this a how a Nonet is written...Another fine write indeed. :o)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/28/2013 1:53:00 PM

Yes, the forever afterlife, I like it ;}

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/28/2013 9:25:00 AM

Harry; This so nice. It is something that we all hope for. Thanks and God bless you. Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2013 5:00:00 PM

I think I got the title wrong. Maybe..."it's SAD (instead of hard) .....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2013 4:59:00 PM

I love this one, Harry. And it reminds me of that song: It's hard to belong to someone else when the right one comes along. Do you know it?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/26/2013 11:02:00 AM

Ahh!! One can dream..Great romantic work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/26/2013 7:20:00 AM

Not familiar with the style but love the poem.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/26/2013 4:14:00 AM

Excellent Nonnet Harry. Warm Smiles, Connie

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/25/2013 2:57:00 PM

nice one, harry! you've done so much with this tricky format...

Painted Hunter

Date: 2/25/2013 1:55:00 PM

These are hard...yours are great

David Williams

Date: 2/25/2013 11:43:00 AM

Harry stunning write here my friend....David

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/25/2013 11:33:00 AM

Harry...this is absolutely amazing. I clicked on it and send it off to my favorite poems folder! You are such a romantic soul! I wish you every happiness. Thanks for your comments on my poems. You buoy me up!

Donna Jones

Date: 2/25/2013 10:48:00 AM

Seems most of us have this dream...