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Forested Trail

You see a path, a forested trail- The ground of which, to you seemed stale- Covered by trees, dead by cold- Footsteps made, now are old- To thee it seems a dreary way- To me it seems as light as day- To know the secrets wherein are hidden- Safety, shelter I will be ridden- To find my path, not alone to take- Your love of me, then shall not fake- Since if it happens, my soul alone- Until another path I’m shown- I found my path, not alone to take- For your love of me, you did not fake-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/17/2012 6:08:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your well written poetry this morning Jordan. I hope to be able to read more of your poems soon. Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2012 4:00:00 PM
A Robert Frost with a lover. I enjoyed this very much!
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Date: 8/16/2012 3:21:00 PM
Aww such a sweet well written piece you have penned here. Well done! ~hugs~ Aimee
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Date: 8/16/2012 3:17:00 PM
very good.
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