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Forest Fire

As lightning strikes trees birds scatter fire spreads through forest. *Lune* 5/3/5 syllables CONTEST:"Haiku Wannabees " sponsored by Debbie Guzzi .

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Date: 9/3/2014 8:58:00 PM
Hi Olusegun, I want you to know I am a fan of your poems. I enjoy seeing you on many of my winning lists... However, it makes me sad, that you hardly ever stop by to say hi, or read my latest poems... Anyways, it is nice anytime I see or spot your name on the soup....Love Linda a fan...
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Date: 6/11/2013 7:24:00 PM
You have learned a new form!!! To increase excitement stay in present tense. [scatter] and write of something uncommon..[insects flame roasted/ pop open/ carpeting the wood] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/6/2013 12:16:00 PM
Well done on your creative pen. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/2/2013 2:03:00 PM
birds scattering like fire... great 'ku so well scribed, olu...nce to read you again!...:) huggs
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