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Forbidding Island

I swim to an unknown rocky strand, marooned by the captain's hand, Up on the barren shore I stand, up on the wave-washed sand. The sandpipers dance a saraband; could I like the birds withstand? Held by the bars of a coral band, alone in a rocky land.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/11/2013 10:08:00 AM
Isaiah.. Congratulations in "'Rhyme Battle: Round 2 contest''...have a nice one... LUV *LINDA
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Date: 12/7/2013 8:27:00 PM
Enjoyed the many rhymes. Congrats, Isaiah!
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Date: 12/7/2013 3:53:00 PM
Blew me away. You deserve the win! Congratulations :) love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 11/15/2013 8:33:00 PM
wow, great rhyming. This is great. BG
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Date: 11/15/2013 5:47:00 PM
very well done. I see people are doing these in styles that is so true to who they are. I can't wait to try one!!!
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