Forbidden Love

You meet someone special
They become an instant friend,
Assuming its ment for ever
Only through death will it end.

Together you share happy times
Lend a shoulder in time of sorrow,
Assume thing's will get better
That there's alway's a tomorrow.

What does one really do
When the feeling's become more,
Think of each other daily
Can't wait to see them at the door.

Inside you know its forbidden
But, in your heart its so real,
For the sole sake of friendship
You keep to yourself on how you feel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 8/29/2009 11:23:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece Jodie, alot of us feel this way at some point in our lives and wonder if we should cross the line, but know to lose what we have before as a friendship is well worth keeping hidden what we might feel.. Thankyou for your comments on my work, love this poem, love jo xxx
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Date: 3/18/2009 11:02:00 AM
Jodie my friend, you described forbidden love so well. If we know it's wrong, we should NOT do it. SIN is the transgression of the law, and the payment of sin is death. Thank you for sharing. Ernilando
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