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'For you my love, the most exquisite pain'

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'For you my love, the most exquisite pain'

For you my love, the most exquisite pain
I know, is a continuous torture
that I must suffer all over again;
afflicted, I am like a sad Creature.
Alone, all too alone! I am ambushed
by my feelings for you, ever anxious
I'll be rejected of you and be crushed
because my love's so desperately zealous.
My love for you burns like a billion stars!--
how much longer I can keep it alive,
from burning out or dying is but ours
to decide; until then we'll love and thrive.
     Please don't fear a love as robust as mine,
     my love, for it aids your soul--even thine.

01//16/2014, "any poem contest #2" Contest

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  1. Date: 1/31/2014 9:28:00 AM
    NGOC, :) thank you for the wonderful winning poem. Enjoy your day. Love ~ SKAT~

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 8:59:00 AM
    There is beauty and sadness within the same space. Well expressed.