For One Day

If I had only one day left with you,
I would ask that day be in God's own time,
one day, a lifetime, every moment
an expression of love,
every hour a new adventure.

twenty four hours to slowly pass
with you at my side,
a never-ending dream,
always giving thanks,
one day left with you, 

would be eternity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/16/2010 11:03:00 AM
Many congratulations Mac on your win in Audrey's fine contest >> James
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:19:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Mac
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:29:00 PM
Congrats Mac on your HM in Audrey's contest just finalized tonight.. a special write and honor for u to enjoy my friend.. with luv from Italy.. ciao..luv..
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Date: 8/15/2010 12:16:00 PM
THanks for submitting your wonderful poem for my first sponsored contest, Mac. Congratulations on you HM. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 6/29/2010 10:07:00 PM
This is just so nice, Mac. WAs it for any contest? Thanks for your kind words. And goodnight, my friend. LUv, Andrea PS Great Deer story you told me!
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Date: 6/23/2010 4:10:00 PM
sounds pretty peaceful :)
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Date: 6/23/2010 6:41:00 AM
How lovely is this!!! :) A real beauty, Mac! Glad I didn't miss this wonderful sentiment! Love, Carrie
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Date: 6/20/2010 3:47:00 PM
Aww, this is seriously and deeply romantic, beautiful and straight from the heart of a very special person. Really holds the definition of true , for me. Exquisite beauty. Thanks Mac for the great honor of placing in your contest, and for your thoughtful comment. You are a gem : )) love, shar xo
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Date: 6/19/2010 8:46:00 PM
lovely!
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Date: 6/19/2010 8:32:00 PM
A lot of good thougths in this one, Mac. Soup mail is waiting. Charles
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:44:00 PM
great romantic poem!! wish it was written to me!
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:24:00 PM
Well said, and thanks for the forth place win.....Karla
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Date: 6/19/2010 1:32:00 PM
Glorious Mac.. simply elegant poetry . so meaningful and lasting luv triumphs.. into eternity.. your comments on my poetry so well taken .. so many poets, too numerous to try to list, have honored me on this site with dedications of poetry about the "Sweetheart" and when Tirzah posted her contest in my honor I just had to write something to say thankxxx to all... u all amaze me that u like my writes so much and enjoy my comments too.. as I do all of yours.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/19/2010 12:38:00 PM
Wow Mac, what a wish! To spend eternity with the one you cherish.. This goes to my fav rgds WN
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Date: 6/19/2010 12:35:00 PM
such a sweet loving write, enjoyed the read..P.D.
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