For My Daughter Yet To Understand

Every morning I awake and see my daughter (first born), its like it washes away all my past sins and even today's sins as I look at her precious beautiful baby eyes,
 it makes this sometimes hard hearted man want to break down soft as a child and cry,
 for no matter how much me and her mother fight and we both know that *****is wrong but just seeing her smile makes it all the more right.
 I look at what I have done but moreso at what I do today....and I know that things must change even if my pockets might have change it dont matter if I cant do things for a better change.......I love you baby Siprianna and you know daddy is going to try and make life better for you than his......LOVE YOU BABY SIPZ SE7EN...... ALWAYS AND FOREVER....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 10/18/2012 12:50:00 PM
The feeling that "I did something right" or "good" welcome to parenthood.
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Travis Lone Hill
Date: 10/24/2012 9:24:00 AM
Thank you very much....and yeah through all my own madness it feels as if I did do something right ever since My daughter and son has come into this world...thank you.
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