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For MR (who goes to work by kayak)

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For MR (who goes to work by kayak)

No longer locked in shiny spheres
that rumble-role in soothing speed
too closely packed on lazy tar
like beads confined upon a string

I feel the water freely flow
My paddle tips reach for the sky
The land two ribbons by my side
No roaring engine leads the way

The water-flow starts at my door
It drifts away through the lagoon
One day I'll join it to the bay
and out beyond the Golden Gate

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  1. Date: 12/17/2010 10:58:00 AM
    Niels, This is a very lovely, thought provoking poem,filled with imagery so clear that it is easy for the reader to visualize what the writer sees. Continued success. Barbara Henry

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 5:36:00 PM
    I like this, Niels B.

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 3:50:00 AM
    It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Neils. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol