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For a Son

Those big blue eyes Red rimmed and tear-filled Hugging me tight, choking Back sobs, pleading “I’m sorry” Oh little one you have nothing To apologize for, it’s not Your fault, you did not choose The life you live How often do you feel Ignored, overlooked, Even neglected by one Who should love you More than anything Poor little child, you know You never have to feel Lost, lonely, or sad If you need someone to Hug your emptiness away I am here, always I may not share your blood But you have captured my heart And I want to give you All the security and attention You have needed for so long Not from birth, but instead A twist of fate, One of life’s unexpected gifts Now and forever, You are my son.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/18/2010 11:18:00 AM
A wonderfully heartfelt poem for your stepson, I hope he enjoys 'You, Me and the Open Sea' & I hope you enjoy reading it to him. Hugs to you both ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 4/5/2010 12:42:00 PM
Lovely and deep words in your poetry today and I too had a step Dad and he was very good to me ... u are blessed with a special gift to luv another man's child... thankxxx for your comments on my contest entry poem.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/12/2010 3:07:00 PM
I saw your comment below and not only are you blessed to have Odin in your life, but he is blessed to have you as well. It's sometimes hard for people to show love to their stepchildren, but it's certainly no problem for you! Wonderful poem, Tricia, I look forward to reading more of your work. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/12/2010 11:05:00 AM
His name is Odin! He is my stepson, my husband named him long before I knew either of them existed. It's been such a blessing having him in my life, and even though there are difficulties too, at least they offer some inspiration!
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Date: 3/12/2010 11:05:00 AM
And thank-you everyone for your comments :-)
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Date: 3/12/2010 11:03:00 AM
This is very heartfelt and poignant, Tricia. How did you get your son? wow, I bet you make a great mother. LUv, andrea ps Is his name Odin? what a unique name!
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Date: 3/11/2010 1:36:00 PM
WOW WELL WRITTEN FALESHIA
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Date: 3/11/2010 10:28:00 AM
I should have commented on this one yesterday, but was in too big a rush. It's very touching. And, FYI, I did cry during "Message from MY Daughter..." Sometimes I just can't help it! Keep up the good work! RAY
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Date: 3/10/2010 6:07:00 PM
well written
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