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Foggy Morn

Foggy Cool, peaceful morn Solitude's feast of quiet commune Dove's coo Red sun slips over morn's blue horizon. Whispy angel wing clouds decorate sky. Sun's up

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Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/29/2013 8:11:00 AM

This was a beauty Sara. Loved it my friend.

Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/6/2013 1:22:00 AM

Another well written Cinquain lovely imagery, I do love the sounds of doves cooing, really any bird calling in the day, blessings sueellen

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/3/2013 2:38:00 PM

Excellent poem adorned with beautiful imagination. Enjoyed a lot, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 8/2/2013 12:38:00 PM

A morning picture indeed. Sara, I enjoyed reading this wonderful write~Caryl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/2/2013 11:07:00 AM

The glory of sunrise gives off this irreversible connection with nature... oh so fine, sara..:)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/2/2013 7:14:00 AM

Nice work. Sometimes I like to see a foggy morning. To me it looks mysterious. Thanks for sharing..... Lucy

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/2/2013 6:31:00 AM

And that sun dissolves all the foggy clouds on the ground! But before that happens there is a lot of quite solitude just as you mentioned...out on the porch, right? I have found that the porch is a great spot of inspiration, but I rarely find myself on it to write! I have my spot in the family room where I write on my computer...I know I should move around...but I have inspiration here as well! I have a great view of our land and the beauty all around from our large windows! Gorgeous Work!!