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Here I am agian after another fight.
 Driving on a deserted road out of sight.
 Wipping away the tears thats blurring my eyes.
 So worked up, I didn't see the fog in the skies.
I drove so long, I don't know how long it will last.
 My car started to slow, I realized I'm out of gas.
 With my frown turned lips, I took out my phone.
 But then I seen that no signal had shown.
I tried to make a call, but it had no service.
 Looking around I started to feel nervouse.
 Then I noticed a car comming behind.
 I seen the headlights as they shined.
A man got out of the car and he asked if I was ok.
 I told him my problem, as my fear frayed away.
 He told me he would give me a ride.
 I said yes, never questioning why.
We drove for a while, no town or car in sight.
 I started to feel that something wasn't right.
 Then he spoke, said it's been a long time.
 I was a little confused, then it hit my mind.
He was the same guy who stalked me.
 We were younger, but how couldn't I see.
 I noticed the change in his personality.
 He dropped the nice guy foramlity.
He gripped the stearing wheel, knuckles pale.
 I tried to open the door, but I failed.
 Then I noticed how it was locked.
 I was so stunned and so shocked.
I told him to stop and let me out.
 He said nothing, so I started to shout.
 He said my boyfriend stole me away.
 Keeping his anger barely at bay.
He said he will steal me now.
 Says he'll do it the only way how.
 He started to speeD the car too fast.
 Seeing the 'Road End' sign we had past.
Then I seen the cliff ten feet ahead.
 He was so focoused, on he sped.
 So I grabbed the wheel and jerked it right.
 Spinning out of control with a blurry sight.
We stopped so hard, I felt so much pain and force.
 There was a tree we slammed into being the source.
 I look and see my kidnapper dead.
 I looked at my hands only seeing red.
Still in shock, not seeing the gas soaking the ground.
 But seeing the spark and the fire spreading all around.
 Before I could reach the car door.
 The car exploded and the flames soraed.

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  1. Date: 5/14/2012 12:06:00 PM

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 10:36:00 AM
    A well written story/poem.......(Are you o.k....) - - oxox Anne-Lise

    hasselbach Avatar karly hasselbach
    Date: 5/3/2012 8:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes I'm fine. this poem was written for a member contest :)