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Fluttering Souls

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Fluttering Souls

                                   Flutter
                               Look up I see
                      Their souls flittering past
          Down here smell carnage, hear clink, slash
               neighing a warning, another one falls
               Crunch of bone- stampeding to death
                      Screams of dying horses
                           Take me from here	
                                     Flutter






For the "SOUND OF EMOTION "
sponsored by Nette Onclaud

Written poem date 6/1/201
by A. Green

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  1. Date: 6/8/2012 5:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on your fluttering win!

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 11:05:00 AM
    A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Amy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 6:18:00 AM
    poetically beautiful and soulfully tragic. Ya got me good with this one, Amy! Outstanding write

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 6:38:00 PM
    AMY , Congratulations with your DEEP "SOUND OF EMOTION" entry in Nette's xool contest. take care ~always :-) PD

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 1:43:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Amy.Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 12:46:00 PM
    Amy, congrats on your win! This is terribly disturbing and sad. I'm sure it wasn't easy for you to write. Though, someone has to speak for those who cannot speak for themselves. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 12:26:00 PM
    Congrats on your win in Nette's contest..There were so many great works that were entered..This one was so descriptive and expressive...Sara

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 9:48:00 AM
    this sound made my heart skip, amy.. congrats on your win in my contest!.:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 7:58:00 AM
    Great write,Amy....congratulations on your win with this wonderful piece....

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 5:25:00 AM
    Amy congrats on your win, wow great..David

  1. Date: 6/3/2012 12:10:00 AM
    Andrea- this is actually from the horse's perspective at a slaughter plant...Had I wrote it how I really wanted to... no one would be able to read it, including me. But thank yoy nonetheless!

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 4:30:00 PM
    oh my you did it on the horses you love so dearly. This is sad but I love h ow you had their souls carried to heaven.

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 6:26:00 AM
    Love this work of art here!!! Excellent write!!

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 12:05:00 PM
    chanced upon your poem, amy.. kindly add your name and date of poem... best of luck!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 3:44:00 AM
    Sad poem :( but a good poem.

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 1:15:00 AM
    Interedting take on the contest theme.Enjoyed.Best wishes.

    poet Avatar kash poet
    Date: 6/3/2012 1:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Interesting....
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 12:30:00 AM
    Good piece, and good luck!