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"Let us not cry for those who are dead"

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"Let us not cry for those who are dead," and gone, I know these words are so right and true; Yet my broken heart will not let me stop weeping, I shed tears each time I recall my beloved family. Only through a rusty, ornate gate do I find them. Oh, the emptiness of my life that once was full, There is a pain I carry within that is unfathomable and deep; I stand with fist clenched and beseech the Lord, Why, echoes in my soul, why did you need each one. Only words engraved in cold stone are they. I am left with broken memories of happiness and bliss, Did you need my baby too, Lord, you already had my true love; Mother and father, sister and grandparents all, Far away is the cemetery where they rest, often I go by bus. My flowers wilted, I stand at their tomb and weep. _____________________________ August 16, 2013 Poetry/Verse/Flowers Wilted Copyright Protected, ID 08-499-425-16 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

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Date: 9/18/2013 1:59:00 PM
well done............... luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/14/2013 6:22:00 PM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 9/14/2013 7:07:00 AM
one can feel your pain through your words...I too have lost many...so beautifully written...congrats on your first place win :)
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:22:00 PM
A deep winning poem Broken, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA
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Date: 9/13/2013 12:23:00 PM
My honor to share placement with you and this heart-wrenching poem. Congratulations Constance. :)
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Date: 9/13/2013 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Constance xx
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:42:00 AM
Oh, hi Constance, a surprise by the nick name broken wings. When I read others' comments I knew about it. How are you?
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Broken wings
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:10:00 AM
I was reluctant to give you first place because you used my poem and I didn't want it to appear I favored it for that reason. In the end it is so well written I was compelled to give you a first place finish. Outstanding piece and I am honored you chose my words to inspire you.
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Date: 9/13/2013 7:02:00 AM
hi Constance truly a poem of note congrats on win Shadow x smile
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Date: 8/22/2013 5:36:00 PM
heartfelt and heartbreaking write, Constance
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Date: 8/16/2013 8:29:00 PM
Broken, sad 'verses' feeling the coldness left behind.. Good luck in the contest.. Linda
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