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Flotsam and Jetsam

The sea was calm on that fateful day
The crew keen and eager to get on their way
The cargo was loaded, all men were on board
The captain at the helm was standing tall

They raised the anchor with a mighty cry
And bade farewell with a heartfelt sigh
Leaving their loved ones with a fond embrace
Not yet knowing the perils they faced

They raced through the waters with rapid speed
The sails billowing out as the captain took heed
Of the clouds building up looking heavy and mean
Would they make it to safety and land unseen

But the seas became heavier, their faces were ashen
When the captain gave the order with gusto and passion
“Toss the cargo to the sea, we need to make light
Or we’ll not make it through the long, dark night”

They threw the cargo over the side
With speed and haste and nowhere to hide
But still they were sinking with no hope in sight
Of land, or man, or a guiding light

And in the still of the morning when all was calm
While the waves rolled in under the coconut palm
All that was found on the distant shore
Was flotsam and jetsam from a ship no more

Copyright © Jacqui Waldron

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  1. Date: 9/26/2012 6:38:00 AM
    great write Jacqui,but to keep the suspense,don't give away the plot too early,'not knowing the perils they faced',told too much,'Off to conquer the sea they raced'

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 2:06:00 AM
    Oh such a tragic end. Well written and lovely.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 12:39:00 AM
    Hi I love this one , awesome xx