Floods

river dark, cold raging, rushing, haunting water, soil, sticks, stones mixing, tracing, challenging lonely, desperate minds

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Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/18/2012 12:02:00 AM

Lovely! Love how you've done your Diamante - the show of emotion blended with the raging river gives an interesting perspective to the poem. Nice!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/15/2012 4:28:00 PM

Perfection!! Love it! Hugs Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2012 2:45:00 PM

HI, Sandra, saw that pretty blonde hair of yours in the community pictures and thought I would see your poems. I can't remember if I have ever talked with you before but I remember someone once mentioned a Sandra to me that was on site. I like reading short poems such as this one of yours. Let me go see your other diamente.

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 10/15/2012 12:36:00 AM

ah.. the floods...well descripted work Sandra...nice share..enjoyed..luv SK <3

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/14/2012 8:24:00 PM

Hola Sandra, once again.. Awe, another nice Diamante, i see this flood leading lots of minds into fear... enjoyed..pd