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Floating Feelings

flying high within floating on wings of love beating on the walls softly like those fluttering wings butterfly feelings emotions kiss when i laid eyes on you becoming one world a dense fog lifts an oasis of paradise drinking from the cup you became my addiction hooked like a fish fighting this loving feeling as the feet landed on shore hook line and sinker you got me walking the sands of life your hands in mine stepping into the setting sun tonight we dine awaiting morning in a rising sun eloping with you to a golden paradise

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Date: 10/10/2013 5:11:00 PM
Well penned romantic piece my friend.
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Date: 10/10/2013 4:46:00 AM
Ahh..this is so romantic ..One i must favour..I am in love with these words especially the ending lines...They really got me hooked.
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Date: 10/9/2013 11:37:00 AM
Hey Liam buddy, Nice romantic write from you my friend. Ken
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