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Flickering Flame

You dance around my flickering flame..
You joust with a slight breeze, who will win this game?
Your hypnotic yellow hue...
Draws my eyes entranced upon you...
Blue dances rings around you my hypnotic friend..
Dancing on my senses an aroma fills the air of a cinnamon spice blend.
I inhale the goodness with a vigor of might!
Oh, how my senses are swimming in a pool of delight!
As the night finishes filling up the room..
I blow you out gingerly your fragrance still looms.
I drift off peacefully closing my eyes shut.
Until morning, the night encompasses me up.

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  1. Date: 10/18/2008 12:20:00 PM
    I love this intimate poem very tastefully done . Michael

  1. Date: 9/7/2008 8:15:00 PM
    Thanks for the comments on my poetry. The rhyme meter feels kind of off in the beginning stanzas and you spelled tommorow wrong. Have a good day.