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Flesh

Annalise a.k.a. Audrey Haick Avatar Annalise a.k.a. Audrey Haick - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Flesh

insatiable...
a necessary burden
Journeying through life

Enervates spirit
engaging worldly pleasures
a walking billboard 
~*~

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  1. Date: 11/23/2012 3:27:00 PM
    This is great, it is intresting how we are provided these weak vessels as our interface with the world around us. Dispite there limitations they are a truly amazing gift. Imagine our joy when we receive our new perfect bodies. Another excellent poem.

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 3:33:00 PM
    Like the phrase "Enervates spirit"... very original! A great senryu... hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 10:12:00 PM
    A lovely Senryu Annalise..miss you very much!

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 8:00:00 AM
    A belated thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Annalise. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 8:02:00 AM
    Yes indeed...this is an awesome senryu of flesh!!!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 12:07:00 PM
    You capture the nature of "flesh" very succintly in your poems. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 12:36:00 PM
    Annalise, absolutely love this especially your "working billboard" line.. Hope your week has been a good one thus far :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 4:35:00 PM
    "Enervates spirit" a nice phrase. Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 9:17:00 PM
    What a cool phrase, a walking billboard. that sure says it, Annalise!!

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 7:21:00 PM
    well seemingly insatiable indeed Annalise! And a tough partner for the soul to deal with at times. and indeed many times the spirit is willing but as our Lord says.. the flesh is weak. A nice double and thank you for your comments which are encouraging in a world which definetely is not.