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Fleas On Noah's Ark

Two fleas are jumpig Onboard of Noah’s Ark For warm nest looking. Two fleas are dreaming Onboard of Noah’s Ark A warm nest enjoying. Two fleas are arriving Onboard of Noah’s Ark At Ararat’s mountain. Their trip is ending Onboard of Noah’s Ark And starts a novel jumping

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Date: 8/2/2013 11:11:00 AM
This compostion is completely wrong, It is not a correct Haiku as far syllables counter. I apologize to have presented it to a contest where it correctly did not receive attention, The basic idea is cute, but not completely developed, It might continue as "billions of fleas around the world are jumping....", but the all form should be revised....
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Date: 6/15/2013 12:43:00 PM
Can't forget the fleas and sometimes wonder if more than two made it on un-noticed...LOL SuZ
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Date: 5/25/2013 11:58:00 PM
cute and innovative way to do the contest!
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Date: 5/21/2013 2:45:00 PM
Good one Mario
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Date: 5/21/2013 11:32:00 AM
- Another clever haiku, this gave me a smile - well done, Mario! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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