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Flawed Before God

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Flawed Before God

The humble man stands before God,
Contrite, and aware he is flawed;
As each day begins,
He confesses his sin,
Then kneels before God and is awed.

The flawless man stands there as well,
Convinced he has no sin to tell;
And that God is his equal
Which leads to his sequel
Of life everafter -- in hell.

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  1. Date: 2/23/2011 5:18:00 AM
    A belated congratulations on your placement Deb, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/6/2011 4:00:00 PM
    deb, this was one of the best in my humble opinion!! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/6/2011 1:31:00 PM
    Toldya it was a winner! Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/5/2011 4:57:00 AM
    Many congratulations Deb on your win in pd's contest. It's great to see your fine poetry being recognised and rewarded, have a lovely weekend....:)x

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 10:33:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) Deb~on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 7:05:00 PM
    Well done Deb. A 7 from me. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 4:36:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 11:29:00 AM
    Hi Deb - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 11:03:00 AM
    Congrats on a well deserved win, Deb. Nice going. Thanks for your gracious words. Have a great weekend. Be well. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 10:07:00 AM
    Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, deb

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 8:26:00 AM
    Very powerful piece! Congrat's on your big win, Deb. Lainie2q

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 7:03:00 AM
    This such good poetry.Many congratulations for this top win.

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 6:43:00 AM
    Congrats Deb on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write and magnificent entry luv.. enjoy another top ten victory and sweet success...

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 12:40:00 AM
    DEB~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat

  1. Date: 1/22/2011 2:22:00 PM
    nicely written and a message conveyed so nicely.... always Michael

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 6:17:00 PM
    An apt message Deb, Thanks for your recent comments on mine. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 8:29:00 AM
    A good pair of limericks contrasting flawed versus flawless.

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 4:58:00 PM
    wowser a sure winner! BOY is she going to have a hard time! LOL and you nailed the meter too! HUZZAH!!!

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 4:42:00 PM
    This is amazingly good. Best set of limericks on this topic YET. a 7!

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 12:38:00 PM
    ps. i wished to express one last thought brought forth amid this canvas of truth my dear, and this being -- a realities moment amid such checkerboard squares for, wisdoms mate is that of, the breath of life -- love again, christopher

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